Is this a good topic sentence? (Mod B Hamlet) (1 Viewer)

[Bloodstriker]

The question is Hamlet is a landmark play offering contemporary audiences insight into universal themes. Write an essay that takes a unique stance on the above statement.

For a paragraph on the theme of revenge: "Shakespeare's 'Hamlet' refines the axiomatic parameters of revenge by refining vengeance into a moral debate of the value of human life and the consequences of one's actions"

Mods, i accidentally posted this thread in the 2013 HSC, can you please delete that one

 

[Haidys]

I think you know the answer.

 

[alexandra10123]

na m8. sucks.

 

[choiyokbao]

thats a pretty beast topic sentence right there

 

[Alkanes]

Too complex atm. I'd rather something more simple so it doesn't tie you into knots. With a theme so common like revenge lol, you can even say the most simplest thing in the world like "Shakespeare explores revenge as universal theme" blah blah

 

[NBGHHS]

Jokes on you if the marker is a dumb chit and was just doing it for da moneyz

 

[asadass]

Oh man, I can't wait to use that in my essay tomorrow!