Lee waited for the phone to ring.. (1 Viewer)

jurianroku

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lol, my story started with Lee waiting for his brother's operation results, and ended with a telemarketer =]
 

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Patar said:
its times like this I realise why us selective kids shine so brightly out from the rest of the state.
lol. oh lord..youre a class A goose. nuff said
 

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Patar said:
no... you end up going to Newcastle with the same qualifications.

There's a difference.
What's the difference? Do enlighten me, Patar.
 

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i did the iron gate and wall one.

it was sorta like a re write of my story i wrote in english one lesson.
i sorta just changed the wording. i was like sweet.

but it got stupider cause the girl didnt have a name. lol
 

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I think I rembered mine

- Lee waited for the phone to ring.
- Lee sat in the corner of his room looking at the windows on the other side.
- The Room was pitch black and the winds were blowing against the windows and doors
- Lee remembered watching the weather report earlier. The weather lady looked anxious as she said there will be a storm and possibly a hurricane
- Lee was frightened. He was fully aware of what happened last Monday
- FLASHBACK to last week. Monday, the week after 911 attacks in the U.S
- Lee had decided to go see a fortune teller in town [Broken Hills - I'm not sure if that's the name of a real town lol]
- It was Lee's birthday and it wasn't the first time he did something bizarre
- Lee crossed the road to a small shop and entered it.
- There was a mysterious person in the room whose face was covered. The person invited Lee to sit down, "You just want your fortune checked, right?"
- Lee helped himself to the floor.
- Person's voice goes weird, "We've spoken before. You remembeer, don't you?"
- Lee stands up looking shocked. He knew that voice, and he knew EXACTLY who this person was.

TO BE CONTINUED!
 

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i did the dark street thing. its about a guy who's constantly paranoid and in a state of confusion. he thinks hes being stalked by a cannibal in a dark alley but finally makes it home.

when he turns on the tv the news reporter says that a cannibal has escaped from the local mental asylum.

he walks out onto the balcony, pierced by fear and stares out into the night.

there. '
in the lake he see's the cannibal's face.....

but it isn't a person.... it's only a reflection.....

not many people understood what this meant, but heres a clue- the title of the story was "schizophrenia"
 

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hahaha my friend did
lee waited for the phone to ring, she won it, she finally had the chance to meet chris brown..
hilarious hahah because she went to the concert the night before!
 

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neon766 said:
LOL! my story developed into Lee getting turned down for a job at macca's =\.
stop basing exam answers on your own life bogan. everyone did him getting turned down for a job. only someone from our school did him committing suicide.
 

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ibleedmclaren said:
Selective kids think that the sun shines out of their arse, but really no one gives a shit.
We end up going to the same universities with the same qualifications.

And the letter to the editor thing?
This guy I knew crossed out M.C Person and wrote M.C Hammer :D
whoow! u goo sister lol
 

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