Zephyrio said:
You're too kind to me.
Your EE2 work is outstanding! Were you going for the "let's make the reader feel really uncomfortable" thing like I was? (your concept challenges our perceptions of identity, right, if I remember correctly). I loved your voice too. I like the word 'exuent' too. Lol =P
haha thanks
yep i think i was trying to be uncomfortably honest/weird when i was writing it.
haha the exeunt thinig oh my that was such a weird addition.. i was serioiusly crazy at that stage and had just decided that i wasn't allowed to go out until i'd written 200 more words, so that's what splurged out
btw did u see i added sneaky christian references in it? lol i was gonna do my whole story on ecclesiastes and then my teacher said they probs wouldn't like that!
did u feel ok with paper 1? cos it is worth about half..
and maybe this will make u feel better - that quote that we were supposed to use as a starting basis?? COMPLETELY DIDN'T TOUCH IT