On the spot poems (2 Viewers)

[Karlmarx]

Hey BOS.

Poems are cool. Write one down as you post in this thread. What comes to mind is always more beautiful.

Be my dream,
for all that i may seem,

Is a fade in the darkness,
A shadow in the night,

Breath the earth,
taste the sun,

Take my hand, and become one,
beat my heart,

the loudest drum,
face me now,

taste my tounge,
as we lie down here,

as we stare,
and become one.


Post your own!

 

[violentdelights]

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif]Exotic
[/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif]don't wanna be your exotic[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] some delicate fragile colorful bird[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] imprisoned caged[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] in a land foreign to the stretch of her wings[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif]don't wanna be your exotic[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] women everywhere are just like me[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] some taller darker nicer than me[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] but like me but just the same[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] women everywhere carry my nose on their faces[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] my name on their spirits[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif]don't wanna[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] don't seduce yourself with[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] my otherness my hair[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] wasn't put on top of my head to entice[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] you into some mysterious black voodoo[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] the beat of my lashes against each other[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] ain't some dark desert beat[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] it's just a blink[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] get over it[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif]don't wanna be your exotic[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] your lovin of my beauty ain't more than[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] funky fornication plain pink perversion[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] in fact nasty necrophilia[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] cause my beauty is dead to you[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] I am dead to you[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif]not your[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] harem girl geisha doll banana picker[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] pom pom girl pum pum shorts coffee maker[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] town whore belly dancer private dancer[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] la malinche venus hottentot laundry girl[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] your immaculate vessel emasculating princess[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif]don't wanna be[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] your erotic[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif]not your exotic[/FONT]


[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif]By Suheir Hammad[/FONT]


[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif]It's not on the spot
[/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif]but I don't care,[/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif]all I wanted to do[/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif]was simply share.[/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif]There.[/FONT]


Word.
​

 

[Karlmarx]

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif]Exotic
[/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif]don't wanna be your exotic[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] some delicate fragile colorful bird[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] imprisoned caged[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] in a land foreign to the stretch of her wings[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif]don't wanna be your exotic[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] women everywhere are just like me[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] some taller darker nicer than me[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] but like me but just the same[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] women everywhere carry my nose on their faces[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] my name on their spirits[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif]don't wanna[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] don't seduce yourself with[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] my otherness my hair[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] wasn't put on top of my head to entice[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] you into some mysterious black voodoo[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] the beat of my lashes against each other[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] ain't some dark desert beat[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] it's just a blink[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] get over it[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif]don't wanna be your exotic[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] your lovin of my beauty ain't more than[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] funky fornication plain pink perversion[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] in fact nasty necrophilia[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] cause my beauty is dead to you[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] I am dead to you[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif]not your[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] harem girl geisha doll banana picker[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] pom pom girl pum pum shorts coffee maker[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] town whore belly dancer private dancer[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] la malinche venus hottentot laundry girl[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] your immaculate vessel emasculating princess[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif]don't wanna be[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif] your erotic[/FONT]​

[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif]not your exotic[/FONT]


[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif]By Suheir Hammad[/FONT]


[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif]It's not on the spot
[/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif]but I don't care,[/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif]all I wanted to do[/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif]was simply share.[/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman, Times, serif]There.[/FONT]


Word.
​

+1

 

[chamelia]

I like taupe carrots
and aubergine parrots.
Plum purple candles
and black rubber sandles.
I like grey kittens
with pastel pink mittens.
Creamy white mugs
and fire engine red bugs.
colours are really great.
mate.

 

[Riet]

her beauty knows of no bounds
thoughts of her stealing my composure
while the other girls do the rounds
I dream of us being closer
Please send a doctor
I've mailed my heart expressly
for a chance to be
with Chanell Leslie

 

[chamelia]

Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaammmmmmyyyyygod.


Ok, rebuttal poem...

He goes to Coles
and tears down all the moles
with military flair
and more chin, than hair.
he's suave and insightful
the man is delighful
some others demand
a man more like dan
but I'm just crazy,
for Riet Rotherham

love
knows
no internet bounds

 

[Riet]

 

[Karlmarx]

love this .

 

[jarkler]

My six year old wife
She's not yet ready
Three more years of life
Straight to my bed-dy

There was so much screaming
And even more blood
She'll remember that reaming
Muhammad you're such a stud

Aisha i love u bby.

 

[Karlmarx]

oh you two,
think it through,

the internet is for me,
not for you.

Your probably mild
and somewhat attractive,

Keep it to yourselfs but,
i'm radioactive,

Internet is for pedo's and gays
and i hope that's not you

And for sure,
i know here, you cant screw,

So fondle some other forum
some other site,

or video tape it,
and show my sister

so her eyes,
may brightly blight.

 

[Arctopus]

Nice poems, fags.

 

[Rasengan2dabalz]

Hey Petro, its me Chris
I call the cousins
they come in dozens
Cmon petro lets go metro

 

[MissSquiggly]

Will you not miss me today?
Your eyes,
Patient and kind
Gazing upon me gently.

Will you not miss me today?
When you speak
Whether it be one word
One syllable...

Will you not miss me today?
For your presence
Fills me with a warmth
That I cannot forget.

Will you not miss me today?
Because I know I will miss you.

Merry Christmas <3 To him of course, and all of you

 

[DannyBoy33]

Hey Petro, its me Chris
I call the cousins
they come in dozens
Cmon petro lets go metro

Good!

 

[Menomaths]

I dig, you dig, we dig, she dig, he dig, they dig.

I know it's not a beautiful poem, but it's very deep.

 

[Sy123]

WORK

--------------------------

They told me to work for a school
__So I worked for a school
They told me to work for a job
__So I worked for a job
They told me to work for money
__So I worked for money
They told me to work for a home
__So I worked for a home
They told me to work for a family
__So I worked for a family
They told me to work for some children
__So I worked for some children
They told me to work so my children can work
__So I worked so my children can work

I worked for work but where I will go my work will not do work
Father Grimm approaches and I have done no work for where my work will not do work

Woe to me!

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How did I go? (I legit just made this)

 

[Sy123]

Man all the poems on this thread are terrible except for mine