QII - What pic you used (1 Viewer)
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White Rabbit
Bloody Shitcakes
I did the wedding one.. from the little girls' perspective, it was all about lossing her real dad, addapting to her mum's new husband etc.
i did the wedding thing and wrote in 1st person... and talked about how i had morning nerves and didnt noe if it was the biggest mistake of my life and stuff... i stuffed it up pretty bad, 5 pages of crap~!
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honky tonk
in Miracle World
So.. let me get this straight.
Did you, or did you not need to include a reference to a mobile phone in your story? Or was it simply one of the images you could talk about?
Why were the other pictures connected to the phone by a dotted line?
Did you, or did you not need to include a reference to a mobile phone in your story? Or was it simply one of the images you could talk about?
Why were the other pictures connected to the phone by a dotted line?
honky tonk
in Miracle World
Oh, and I did my story on a dying man who boards a plane with a bitter and cold attitude towards life, who - after meeting a somewhat extraordinary man - leaves the airport with a whole new outlook on life.
Hmmm.. sounds like a film synopsis. I only wrote 6.5 pages though, I wanted to write more.
Hmmm.. sounds like a film synopsis. I only wrote 6.5 pages though, I wanted to write more.
Macccca
wazzlewoozle
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ssssonicyouth
phonic booth
it said select an image-- so i don't think it was necessary to talk about the phone-- you just didn't select that image 
PacifistWarrior
Member
I figured that because the phone had dotted lines coming out of it and going to the pictures, that it must mean put one of these pictures in place of the wedding one. Probably because they didn't want to have to print out a whole bunch of identical phones with just the pictures different. So I imagined the plane photo in the place of the wedding photo, and because the phone is a major part of that visual text, I included it in my story.
I hadn't prepared a story in advance though because I'm usually pretty creative on the spot, but this time I did the questions in a different order than I usually do (I usually go section 1,2,3, but this time did 1,3,2), and was stuck in analytical mode and my story sucked!
I hadn't prepared a story in advance though because I'm usually pretty creative on the spot, but this time I did the questions in a different order than I usually do (I usually go section 1,2,3, but this time did 1,3,2), and was stuck in analytical mode and my story sucked!
Bolkonski
Brother Angry Dave
I did the plane. Alot of people at my school did also. I think it was because of its ability to be widely interpreted into which ever situation.
My story was about Pride. You know the Fight or flight thing? Well.. me.. autobiographic, decided to do away with pride and fly. metaphorically and literally.
My story was about Pride. You know the Fight or flight thing? Well.. me.. autobiographic, decided to do away with pride and fly. metaphorically and literally.
Macccca
wazzlewoozle
EDIT: ah, thanks for making this a poll
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xanthanotus
Member
elizabethy
lol...i used practicly the exact same story line lol.......
i had like this old lady reminising over a photo and remebering the first boy who ever tryed to kiss her when she was six and she ran home thinking she had kooties and was going to die blah blah blah (far more indepth and detailed lol) and then like how her perspective of boys changed and then the twist at the end was the guy she was marring in the photo was actually the first boy who tried to kiss her lol....it was rather cute lol..and sounded a hell of alot better then this sum up lol!!!
lol...i used practicly the exact same story line lol.......
i had like this old lady reminising over a photo and remebering the first boy who ever tryed to kiss her when she was six and she ran home thinking she had kooties and was going to die blah blah blah (far more indepth and detailed lol) and then like how her perspective of boys changed and then the twist at the end was the guy she was marring in the photo was actually the first boy who tried to kiss her lol....it was rather cute lol..and sounded a hell of alot better then this sum up lol!!!
ballerinabarbie
bundy for me
i did the bushfire one... wrote about a person living in the country - all their experiences etc... then at the end a fire came along (sounds corny... but it wasn't!)
Uh oh... I used the phone. It said to use one of the images, and that was an image on the page, so i figured you could use it. And its not like my whole story was about a phone... it was just stimulus for the beginning and end... is that ok??? AHHH!
littlemic21
Lurking In The Shadows
rock climbing... guy stranded in desert... reflecting on life... gtes rescued... changes life bla bla