[SALE $6-10] Selling the EXACT English Advanced Essays that I wrote in the 2022 HSC - 94 External - 99.40 ATAR (1 Viewer)

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I'm selling the exact essays I wrote in the external HSC word for word - costing me $86 to get it back which are now in a word document (1.1k words each essay).

My Credentials:
- 99.40 ATAR, graduated from Sydney Boys High School
- 5th in State for Music 1
- All Rounders / Top Achiever
- Elite Athlete (4 bonus points from UNSW)

Raw Marks:
Common Module (1984 by George Orwell) - 19.5/20
Module A (Jane Campion's "Bright Star" and Keat's "When I Have Fears", "Bright Star") - 18.5/20
Module B (King Henry IV by Shakespeare) - 17.5/20
Module C (5 Mark Analytical and a 15 Mark Discursive on shared fulfilment) - 18.5/20

Pricing:
*All purchases include HSC essay and prepared Trial HSC Essay for double the value
- 1 Module $10
- 2 Modules $16 ($8 each)
- 3 Modules $21 ($7 each)
- All for $24 ($6 each)

Reply, PM or email zak2227@gmail.com for enquiries

I was always terrible at English, ranking in the 130s for each internal assessment. I then realised exactly what was dragging me down - my adapatation to questions were trash because my essay itself was restricting me. Thus after improving that I received 51/193 in trials and my overall rank for english jumped to 108/193. As my school only gets about 40 band 6s, my chance to get a b6 was slim but I improved my essays to be extremely adaptive to scrape a 94 external with 85 internals, thus clutching a band 6 for english (one of 44 people who did receive b6 at my school this year).



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Short Answer 16/20
Common Module 19.5/20
Module A 18.5/20
Module B 17.5/20
Module C 4.5/5 + 14/15 (18.5/20)
90 raw scaled to 94

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53 pages 😅
 

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Theres two markers and u get the average of both so they differed by 1 mark
 

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Can I just ask what your strategy for Eng Adv was for externals? Preparation / did you memorise??? Seeing as it's four days out for us do you have any tips (I'm just looking to memorise rn and then adapt on the day), and seeing as you sound like you had great baseline essays (as much as I'd love to buy them - no point if I'm using my ones very soon).......
tldr what was your English strategy?
 

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memorised everything 2 weeks before start period and grinded previous hsc/trial papers for adaptations. Tips i guess is to just not forget your essay as thats game over lol. That was my most dreaded fear and cuz i wanted to memorise everything i started really early (as soon as trials finished and fixed up the essays).
 

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memorised everything 2 weeks before start period and grinded previous hsc/trial papers for adaptations. Tips i guess is to just not forget your essay as thats game over lol. That was my most dreaded fear and cuz i wanted to memorise everything i started really early (as soon as trials finished and fixed up the essays).
good thing im starting memo five days before lmaoooo
 

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Can I just ask what your strategy for Eng Adv was for externals? Preparation / did you memorise??? Seeing as it's four days out for us do you have any tips (I'm just looking to memorise rn and then adapt on the day), and seeing as you sound like you had great baseline essays (as much as I'd love to buy them - no point if I'm using my ones very soon).......
tldr what was your English strategy?
Ohh yeah i wanna mention for paper 1 i did the common mod essay first cuz i write essays really fast. Finished in like 30 mins and i knew it was a banger essay so i got super confident to do short answer in 1 hour and got TOO confident and got sht lol. Anyways my reasoning is that when u look at the short answer visuals u automatically thinking about it when u write ur essay. And ur essay pretty much cant be changed when you write it down but the short answer you can just write 'extra paper' and rewrite the whole response to make it better.
 

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I'm selling the exact essays I wrote in the external HSC word for word - costing me $86 to get it back which are now in a word document (1.1k words each essay).

My Credentials:
- 99.40 ATAR, graduated from Sydney Boys High School
- 5th in State for Music 1
- All Rounders / Top Achiever
- Elite Athlete (4 bonus points from UNSW)

Raw Marks:
Common Module (1984 by George Orwell) - 19.5/20
Module A (Jane Campion's "Bright Star" and Keat's "When I Have Fears", "Bright Star") - 18.5/20
Module B (King Henry IV by Shakespeare) - 17.5/20
Module C (5 Mark Analytical and a 15 Mark Discursive on shared fulfilment) - 18.5/20

Pricing:
*All purchases include HSC essay and prepared Trial HSC Essay
*Purchasing Module C includes prepared discursive, creative and reflection for both
AND external discursive and analytical
- 1 Module $15
- 2 Modules $26 ($13 each)
- 3 Modules $30 (~$10 each)
- All for $32 ($8 each)

Reply, PM or email zak2227@gmail.com for enquiries

I was always terrible at English, ranking in the 130s for each internal assessment. I then realised exactly what was dragging me down - my adapatation to questions were trash because my essay itself was restricting me. Thus after improving that I received 51/193 in trials and my overall rank for english jumped to 108/193. As my school only gets about 40 band 6s, my chance to get a b6 was slim but I improved my essays to be extremely adaptive to scrape a 94 external with 85 internals, thus clutching a band 6 for english (one of 44 people who did receive b6 at my school this year).



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How do you even remember the exact essay u wrote in the HSC? Was it a pre planned essay you memorised because your exaggerating right?
 

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