OK seriously what the fuck is wrong with blue suede.... he/she must be retarded to call this:
Ode to Jennifer
An exotic, foreign princess
Flaunts her royal, perfect grace
A piercing gaze of wondrous sensuality
Running rivulets of ecstasy through the channels of your heart
A river of silky black hair frames just gorgeous onyx eyes
Along with an innocent smile to melt your soul
The sweetest voice you can imagine
Pure, delicate, sincere
An icon of legendary beauty, unmatched on this earth
Sexualised and demeaning and rude and chauvinistic. Ffs what is this world coming to, with retarded people like this. I feel shocked and am finding it difficult to comprehend the absolute stupidity of blue suede's analysis of my poem. Fucking hell.