Hey there, your PM box is full so I had to reply here
Thanks so much for the feedback, that's really helpful
1. I used this sentence as I felt I really needed to let the marker's know that I wasn't deviating from the question - but I can see now how that I probably could expect that their understanding of 'texts' wasn't strictly just literary
3. I actually liked the analysis of music because I thought it nobody else would have done it - do you think it's farfetched, or just irrelevant to an english essay? As a musician it seems like the music in that scene was a fairly direct allusion (there's a better word for this) to that composer. Maybe i'm just being pretentious. Should I not bank on a marker to agree?
4. That was just a mis-edit, I had another draft that had all 3 of those themes.
Also, would it be possible for you to give it a mark?
i'm tired but thankfully no school until the 28th
I'm in year 10 but I'm accelerated in maths and chemistry.
Thanks for the tips. do u know any tutoring companies that offer umat? Cos I just read through some questions and it seems section 2 will be my weakest.
BTW do u got to uws???
How are u?
Since school holidays have started, i think it's a great time to start studying for the umat.
Can u please give me tips on how to study for umat.
BTW i have sent u a friend request.
Have a good holiday
Would have said how everyone made it famous and how the abnormality in its shape gave it a focus of belonging to a different race. So in a way, the point would be something like "If you stand out you will belong."
But I had a better creative based on a real life experience anyway.
meh idk really, i guess i like a bit of everything. tbh doing all this finance has really disillusioned me about what value i'm really adding to people's lives. like, if the economy crashes and i'm reponsible for people losing money etc that shit is pretty fucked lol. idk i guess eveyone has a crisis.
wow nice! know which area of med you wanna go into?