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gesh17

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Mine's a critical response:

"the abstract equation"
 

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Quote 1:
Now the melancholy

Quote 2:
I grant you

Story:
Her name is
 

agirlinatutu

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[FONT=&quot]“Human kind cannot.."

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[FONT=&quot]TS Eliot quote.[/FONT][FONT=&quot]
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either "I tried to" or "They took my". It's a toss up.
 

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Friday, March 13 is the official beginning but, of the story, it's sleeping wasn't coming.
 

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I'm still doubtful if what I have will suffice as an my introduction, but this is what I have:

"With piercing green"
 

S_A_M_U_t

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"A deep thrill had descended down her rigid spine, offering her a slight sensation from his haunting breath that caressed the back of her neck; she had felt love in its purest form."

My style of writing is quite confusing. But it's basically the penultimate act before sex.
 

Shadowdude

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"A deep thrill had descended down her rigid spine, offering her a slight sensation from his haunting breath that caressed the back of her neck; she had felt love in its purest form."

My style of writing is quite confusing. But it's basically the penultimate act before sex.
Uhh, why are you writing about sex?
 

S_A_M_U_t

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Uhh, why are you writing about sex?
Well I'm playing on the idea of the loss of innocence. A mid-aged woman, plauged with insecurites, experiences the apparent feeling of "love" for the first time, yet the guy pleasuring her only wants to pleasure himself.

Peace.
 

Shadowdude

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Well I'm playing on the idea of the loss of innocence. A mid-aged woman, plauged with insecurites, experiences the apparent feeling of "love" for the first time, yet the guy pleasuring her only wants to pleasure himself.

Peace.
Hmm, nice story concept. Though, if I were writing it - I would prefer to use teenagers as the characters because I think that may work better from a realistic point of view.

Oh those teenage mothers...
 

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^^ lawl and totes gonna end it with "and then i woke up" hahaha
Mine starts with "Four white walls"
 

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