Swizzle's Love Thread - Post anonymous messages to your secret crush (4 Viewers)

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Bitches love acrostics.
I will write you an acrostic poem, Kelvin:
*clears throat*

Kelvin iz da c00lest kid evar.
Even da sch00l teachurz dun mess wif him.
Love is bel0w him. Why wud he l0ve sum1 when he ken get all da bitchez he lykz.
Vict0ree is guarunteed wen he g0ez hunting for da ladiez.
I even concede ; dat he iz orsum
Nevar mezz wid da kelvinator or dats da last fing ya do m8
 

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I will write you an acrostic poem, Kelvin:
*clears throat*

Kelvin iz da c00lest kid evar.
Even da sch00l teachurz dun mess wif him.
Love is bel0w him. Why wud he l0ve sum1 when he ken get all da bitchez he lykz.
Vict0ree is guarunteed wen he g0ez hunting for da ladiez.
I even concede ; dat he iz orsum
Nevar mezz wid da kelvinator or dats da last fing ya do m8

Much love anna.

Yes well appreciate it.

You do not understand as of yet. I will clarify during the sesh.
Much love to you as well Sly.
 

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Poetry shouldn't be about some fleeting crush not having interest in you because that's fucking childish. Poetry is supposed to be much purer, much more elegant than that. It's supposed to express a critical evaluation of personal experiences or historical occurrences, create a world in which a greater meaning can be drawn from it or perhaps inspire hope, irreverence, motivation or dissatisfaction with the current perceptions and preconceptions that society has.

Poetry is about enlightenment and skillful manipulation of language to illustrate deeper meaning, not about crying over some fucking girl you've known for two weeks and never managed to talk to her because you lack the testicular fortitude.

EDIT: or incest. Incest is bad
 

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Ty Abs and Omni

*sigh*

Down by the river, scented air
Smelled, caressed your long silky hair
Into each other's eyes we stare
A small kiss here and there

But now you disappear
Your voice, laughter I can still hear
This hollowing feeling I possess
I loved you all my life I confess
 

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To a particular female:

Someday...

Someday you may appreciate
What I did for you
What I felt for you
What I hoped for us
Or maybe you won't
But regardless of that:

I cannot uncry the tears I shed,
when I realised I couldn't have you

I cannot uninflict the pain I endured,
when your friends and yourself turned me away

I cannot uninvest the time I spent,
doing the little things I hoped you would notice

I cannot undream the dreams I dreamt,
for the perfect life that we could have had together

I cannot undo the things I did,
I cannot undo my efforts,
I cannot start unloving you
Or I would have never loved you at all.


Hmm, I should be a poet.
 

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