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Yep I screwed up my essay I don't think I answered the question right lol. But paper 2 was good!
 

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Yep I screwed up my essay I don't think I answered the question right lol. But paper 2 was good!
haha i think i did to

i kinda accidentally shifted the question and threw in words to help it link to my essay haha

hopefully my teacher accepts it!
 

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What was the essay question?

Ours was: Relationships with others dictate whether we belong or are isolated. To what extent do your studies of XXX support this idea.

What text did you have to use???
 

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did this have a travel journal in it... or was it a different paper...?
 

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I started with Section 1 and ended up spending like 40mins on it!!!!
Then did the essay, and began creative with 1/2hr to go!

the section 2 quotes were good and pretty adaptable i reckon... did you quote yours exactly? or just refer to them in passing in your story?

i took the 'moments' part of the essay as significant opportunities, and mentioned how reality can shape your imagined sense of belonging. (hopefully this makes sense for those of u who do Great Expectations or Mao's Last Dancer
 

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How many ORT's did you guys have to talk about in the belonging essay ?
 

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Hmmm.. well
-short answer was okay (I practised lots before hand)
-essays.. well.. time management is the only issue for me.
- creative writing...........lets not go there :alone:
 

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We got our results back for Paper 1 and Paper 2.

Unseen texts: 15/15
AOS Essay: 11/15
Creative Writing: 11/15

So for that, I only got 37/45. I did much better in Paper 2 though :3
 

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Lol i'm a little late but I found the paper pretty easy. I messed up Paper 1 because I misread the clock so there was a disappointing mark there but overall it was quite good. Disappointed that the standard of questions was so low, but then again I also didn't do as well as I had hoped in Paper 2 either so I've lowered my expectations for Advanced overall now.

Paper 1
- S1 - 13/15
- S2 - 11/15
- S3 - 15/15

Paper 2
- Q1 - 19/20
- Q2 - 19/20
- Q3 - 19/20
 
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Hey what was the exact question for section 3 of last year trials.
 

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