I know i probly shudnt post it on here but i dont know how to create a new thread
Can you please read my poem and give me any tips to improvement??
I will always love you
I love you
I love you not
Millions of questions
Running through my head.
We were perfect in every single way
And when i confessed my love for you
You simply pished me away...
Without realising how much i had fallen for you.
I miss your cute smile,
The way it made me feel..
Everytime you said "i love you"
I pinched myself to mke sure it was real
You thought my love was a frendship,
It was meaningless to you.
I went beyond my comfort zone,
just so i could please you.
Every step of the way,
you told me what to do.
You said it would make you happy,
and i thought i was proving my love to you
I lost my happiness
I lost my hope
I forgot how to smile..
Regardless of you teaching me so much.
My emotions took control,
but my brain kept doubting you.
I took the confusion out on myself,
just so i didn't hurt you.
Your lack of love
made me cry,
made me bleed,
it even made me want to commit suicide.
Now i realise through the hurt and pain,
that i still love you
and i would do anything
just to be with you again.
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Any comments are appreciated
Thnx