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Share your thoughts of Section 3. (Extended Response)

'understanding nourishes belonging...
a lack of understanding prevents it.'

Demonstrate how your prescribed text and ONE other related text of your own choosing represent this interpretation of belonging.
 
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i LOVED this response!! loved loved loved!!!
i know alot of people at my school hated it though. i was so happy with how i went :D
 

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I thought it was pretty good - nothing like what we've practised and done in class but not undoable, so I worked around it.

It said to use ONE related, right? I only did one.
 
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I thought it was pretty good - nothing like what we've practised and done in class but not undoable, so I worked around it.

It said to use ONE related, right? I only did one.
yep only said one.
thankfully cos my other ORT didnt lend to the question and i wouldnt have finished the paper otherwise. i just finished the way things were.
 

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I didn't finish - I had two words to go. But otherwise it seemed to work. I had to manipulate my texts slightly, however.
 

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It was a fairly good one... Most of my points were easily linkable, some points I couldn't link too well, but still did. My 2nd ORT didn't relate to it, but luckily my first one did :spin: Didn't use a second, but would a 2nd get no marks because of the "ONE" ?

why one?

for my prescribed text (as you like it) the question was pretty crap
Was good for Oliver and Orlando... And my As you like it ones.
 

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Is it just me who thought the question was ambigious?
 

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Smashed the heck out of it but wasted too much time on it.. I extended my points for Prescribed and Related to keep reflecting the question but man wrote way too much.
 

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so glad i did texts on prejudice and racial discrimination
 

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really happy with the whole paper 20 pages in the bitch :D
The smugness when hearing people gasp in horror when you ask for more paper is priceless. But it is quality/quantity.

How many words do ya reckon?
 

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This section was probably my worst. Just because I found it difficult to link my prescribed text to 'understanding' so made up some cliches/generic crap and didn't really link my points well at all. A bit of a mess, really. Mine had too much quantity, not enough quality.
 

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Are you allowed to have 2 related text?

The question was pretty good but I didn't see aything similar with the practice questions i did.
 
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4.5 pages, im happy with that, def not worded as good as i wanted but whatevz
 

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