Advanced English HSC Assessment Feedback (1 Viewer)

[Timmy209]

Hey guys! I'm a student who just started Year 12 Advanced English.
Our assessment includes inviting and reviewing choices made in the Common Module of the Advanced Course. As part of this review process, we have been requested to make a 3-5 minute submission to the English Advanced teachers in the form of a multimodal digital presentation about a text of our choice. The text I have chosen is "Araby" by James Joyce
If you guys could take a look at my speech it would be extremely appreciated
Any amount of feedback is suitable, whether it's good or not.
For more information please DM.

Thanks.

 

[STaTiC1]

Hey Timmy, I'd love to look at your speech.

 

[Timmy209]

Sure, just look at your DM's!
Thanks for taking some time out of ur day to look at it

 

[chloehanna]

Hey guys! I'm a student who just started Year 12 Advanced English.
Our assessment includes inviting and reviewing choices made in the Common Module of the Advanced Course. As part of this review process, we have been requested to make a 3-5 minute submission to the English Advanced teachers in the form of a multimodal digital presentation about a text of our choice. The text I have chosen is "Araby" by James Joyce
If you guys could take a look at my speech it would be extremely appreciated
Any amount of feedback is suitable, whether it's good or not.
For more information please DM.

Thanks.

Hey Timmy,
I can take a look ay your speech too

 

[adam_03]

May I plz look at it too