YBK
w00t! custom status!! :D
okayz... good night jhakka
thanks guys
thanks guys
Feel free to pop in here anytime with any questions you have regarding english - whilst we do check most of the English forums, we can also always be contacted here, and are always happy to help if we are able to.YBK said:okayz... good night jhakka
thanks guys
thanks btw, when i mentioned 'sexy writing', I was simply referring to a monologue I wrote from the point of view of the creature in Frankenstein.glitterfairy said:Feel free to pop in here anytime with any questions you have regarding english - whilst we do check most of the English forums, we can also always be contacted here, and are always happy to help if we are able to.
Emotional, but don't over do it. Simple things packaged into your sentences can often do the trick as well as anything else.YBK said:thanks btw, when i mentioned 'sexy writing', I was simply referring to a monologue I wrote from the point of view of the creature in Frankenstein.
Well, i ended up getting a really crappy mark... and apparently all the marker wanted was textual support, which i had in there: just not directly.
I thought monologues had to be very emotional; am I wrong?
ahhh... interestingkami said:Emotional, but don't over do it. Simple things packaged into your sentences can often do the trick as well as anything else.
Hmm.YBK said:thanks btw, when i mentioned 'sexy writing', I was simply referring to a monologue I wrote from the point of view of the creature in Frankenstein.
Well, i ended up getting a really crappy mark... and apparently all the marker wanted was textual support, which i had in there: just not directly.
I thought monologues had to be very emotional; am I wrong?
glitterfairy said:Lynn remembers doing much of that during Year 11. However, due to disciplining herself (for she also tends to hide in a book when she is supposed to be studying - and like most others, refuses to put down a book until she has finished it) she has not read for pleasure since the HSC. She feels deprived.
Lynn does however, highly approve of good fantasy novels, but due to the work involved (not to mention the time) there are rarely enough to fulfill the general demand.
Definitely.... ive read the SoT series like... um... four times (there are now 9 books)... they are sooo excellently good!!!glitterfairy said:Lynn agrees to an extent... there is nothing quite so good as sinking your teeth into the most wonderful novel the first time. The second time can also be quite as good... but the adrenaline rush of *really* wanting, and needing to know what is on the next page is something that really only tends to happen the first time.
But she does agree that re-reading a golden oldie is far better than reading something bad.
That's what Damnation is scared of...just finished her second adv trial now...only maths, eco, legal and ext to go...oh god...Someone hand Damnation a knife!glitterfairy said:...I also did the subtle thing last year for EE1 Trials and got absolutely slammed.
Monique grinsPerfectByNature said:ooooh!!!!!!!!!! Lexi gasps!!!